Arlen Wolfe

Hi argyleninja,
Really sorry for the late reply! All of the staff have been really busy with pesky life responsibilities.

Good start so far, but there needs to be a lot more detail added before we can accept Arlen:

More detailed description (or if you want to avoid this, you can also find a playby). This should include Body type, type of hairstyle, any peculiarities (scars, birth marks, dimples, freckles), anything obviously noticable (e.g. traits that would stand out like buck teeth, big eyes, long face, etc.). Anything you would notice on a first impression (how he walks or talks).

A lot more detail in personality; more traits, flaws, quirks, etc. Put them all in sentence format, dont seperate them in different paragraphs.

Same with history, a lot more detail. What kind of relationship did he have with his dad, when and how did he learn he was a demigod, how old was he when his father remarried and what is Arlen’s relationship with his stepmom, what kind of house and home life does have, how is his life in camp like, what kind of school life does he have, any peculiarities with his history, anything related to his cooking interest, etc.

Thanks,
Porter