Ailena Page

Hi Anna,

Really sorry for the late response! That staff have been currently very busy with external commitments but we are starting to be able to have the time to come back on the site again!

You have a good starting point, but a bit more detail is going to be needed from your character before she gets accepted.

First of all, try not to add catagories like Traits, Flaws, Quirks, etc. When organizing your character information, please use only the categories asked for in the How to Create Your Character page. The information you include in these categories should be presented in paragraph format (no dot jots, lists, etc). This allows you to get into details and explanations, and we would like everyone to use the same format so it is easy to follow.

Explain Ailena's personality in more detail. Why does she dislike people asking her out? What makes her easily angered? Is there a reason behind having an apple in her pocket? What kind of personality would she have to inspire her to do that?

Slow down with the history! Don't be afraid to tell Ailena's story in more than one sentence. This is her story, after all. How did Apollo and Megan Page meet? Where did Ailena and her mother live and how was their home life? How was life like in the past 6 years at camp? What has she been doing all this time?

Thanks again for all of your patience,
Porter