Bobo Jack

Hello there,
You're on the right track, you just need to work on a few things.
Firstly, the Poseidon cabin is currently full. We have a 3 children per cabin limit on big three children (trying to stick to the story line where the big three don't have a lot of kids), so if you could choose another god, that would be cool!
Secondly, you need to add WAY more detail into your personality. Try telling us about his likes and dislikes, his hobbies, what he does when he's happy, what he does when he's sad or angry. Does he keep to himself or does he love to be with friends? Expand and add as much detail as you can!
Same goes for history. We want to firstly know how Bobo came to be. How did his parents meet, and what attracted the god to Jane? Tell us about his life growing up. Where did he live? Was he a trouble maker? Was he often in danger of monsters? Did he have many friends in school? Did he often get kicked out of school? Tell us how he got to camp, and what hardships he faced while doing it? What monsters was he chased by?
It would also be great if you could write your descriptions in paragraph format instead of listing things.
Thanks!

~~Teddy